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January 13, 2015, 12:47:13 PM on

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January 13, 2015, 11:49:19 PMReply #1 on

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Nicely done, but why were your plans thwarted at the end?
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Hi John

We were "thwarted" because when we got to Greyabbey, the road(s) to the abbey itself were all closed due to roadworks. So we couldn't get near it.  :BangHead

Needless to say, there was one guy standing there doing nothing, and not a lot of work or progress being made that I could see....ahh my taxes at work!? :Topes
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January 22, 2015, 07:39:01 PMReply #3 on

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Finally got around to listening. Well done, definitely got more relaxed and comfortable as you got into it. Like you easy but informative tone, doesn't sound like you're being given a history lecture until you realise how much you're taking in  :icon_study: :thumbsup
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I enjoyed this a lot. Do some more!

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Hi Sin

That's great feedback and genuinely appreciate it! :icon_redface: Thank you! Gives me confidence to do more. I definitely settled in as the video progressed. Glad it didn't feel like a lecture!! :icon_biggrin:

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Thank you good sir! I intend to do some more (which means getting out on the bike!!) so all good!  :icon_lol: 
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Very nice. Thank you. Jealous that you can be riding at this time of the year.
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